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» Poem: You caused it all *plz comment*
You caused it all *plz comment*
written by mishy0077
06:00 AM 3/19/05
Just thinking that I'll never be able to look into your eyes again
Starts to bring back all this unbearable, heart aching, pain
I'll never be able to tell you my every thought like I did before
This fight I'm fighting with all my will is an un-winable war
My heart is shattered, my hopes and dreams are too
And to think all of this was caused by sweet innocent you!
I cry myself to sleep, wishing I could hold you once more
Hoping that when I wake up you'll be next to me on the floor
So I can slice open your chest and rip out your beating heart
So you know what I have been going through, right from the start
I want you to know the pain of loosing one without a goodbye
I want you to feel how I feel on the long nights that I cry
I want you to know how it feels to be dying on the inside
I want you to know what it's like to just want to always hide
Hide from the light and everyone close to you around
Feel like you keep getting pushed to the ground
Know what it's like to see the blood rush out from your skin
I want you to know what it's like to always want to sin
FEEL WHAT I FEEL! CRY WHY I CRY!
Stay up all night, WANTING TO DIE!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just about the one I lost. PLEASE COMMENT

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» Comments / Feedback
by buried_alive (3-19-2005 - 06:06 AM)
damn !!!!! thats a great poem....thats bacicly how i feel about a couple of my ex's!

by CrYsTaLZ_05 (3-19-2005 - 06:22 AM)
good poem

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