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Rhythmic Obscurity (plz comment damn it)
written by cryptic_misery11:03 PM 3/19/05Reflecting a small friction of concealed light
Of a shade tending toward black
In resemblance to others so pale and blank
With the absence of pallid radiation
Which begins to illuminate this white noise..
A descending resound of screaming
Left with a heavy silence, so still and mute...
I try to hum in seclusion to cover the dead air
And touch my hand to the ice cold glass
Of this dense corner in a hollow and depleted room
Being worthy of all things barren and abandoned...
A flooded heart, overflowing with vital fluids
About to leave aside everything it beats for
This melody that sinks in out of tune
A deadly refrain with lyrics made of tears
And a strain made up of anxiety
Completing a sound wave of senseless panic
That vibrates, making a quavering enterance
Seeping quickly through my veins
Throbbing rapidly, my head is pulsing
It breaks through all my vascular organs
Killing the essence which I once held near... |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-19-2005 - 11:05 PM)
by cryptic_misery (3-19-2005 - 11:07 PM)
by _razorblade_kisses_ (3-20-2005 - 06:57 PM)
ive just spent about an hour reading through all of your poetry, and i find it very well written. it kind of seems like you developed as a writer from last july (when you first started posting) and i just wanted to say that you have a ton of awesome works posted here. |
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