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» Poem: Kjærleik
Kjærleik
written by Norway_babe
01:00 PM 7/27/04
Ho ser på han
Han ser ikkje tilbake
Ho kjenner at ho blir trist
Han så jo på ho heile tida før, tenkte ho.
Ho begynte å gråte litt..
Han hørte det men ville ikkje snu seg
Ho jekk.. Ho jekk lengre inn i skogen
Han hørte at ho snudde
Han begynte og løpe etter ho
Ho stoppa, såg han inn i øyne
Han såg tilbake
De blei ståande og stirre ei stund
Til han sa. - eg ville ikkje se tilbake, eg trudde du så på meg fordi eg er stygg..
Ho svarte ikkje, ho kyssa han i stedet.

Ho hadde sett på han med et blikk som viste kjærleik...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is a poem i made in norwegian dialect.. it's a lovestory between a young girl and a young boy.

please leave comments if u understand my poem

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» Comments / Feedback
by Psycho_Penguin (7-27-2004 - 07:49 PM)
I only understand bits a pieces here and there... But I love the culture. You should translate it.

by Psycho_Penguin (7-27-2004 - 07:49 PM)
I only understand bits a pieces here and there... But I love the culture. You should translate it.

by i_love_sandy (8-3-2004 - 11:40 PM)
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... what does it all mean? confusing. cool though.

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