» Poem: "YURN" PLZ COMENT |
"YURN" PLZ COMENT
written by respectme4whoiam1811:21 PM 3/23/05i yurn for that smile u tend to give me
i yurn for the happiness u tend to give me
i yurn for the taste of ur lips
and i yurn for the way u treat me
i yurn for u,
cuz were made for one another.........
this will be continued soon..... |
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» Comments / Feedback | by ()Diamond() (3-23-2005 - 11:33 PM)
er,what?i am a ppoet,but your poem has no real meaning to it.sorry. |
by tripin_thoughts13 (3-24-2005 - 12:16 AM)
I'm sry but i do not understand the point of this poem:S????? |
by respectme4whoiam18 (3-24-2005 - 08:06 PM)
this doesnt have to have any point, it was just something i wrote.
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