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» Poem: The story of suicide
The story of suicide
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
11:51 AM 3/24/05
A young girl hidden in the back of class,
Ignoring peers and forgetting her past.
Goes through like like everythings fine,
hoping she'll forget the bad things in time.
She take the blade as her survival peice,
carving lines letting pain ease.
Hiding her scars away from the world,
she's just a lonely broken hearted girl.
She sits at home tears wet on her cheek,
continuing to stare as her eyes leak.
She looks in the mirror, searching for an escape.
But she has discovered it's way too late.
The empty mind is compatible with her broken heart.
Her sunken in eyes and her discovered scars.
Everyone knows, that she's the only one she gots,
She prays for the world to suddenly,
stop.
She cries aloud and everyone hears.
But suddenly the message was finally clear.
The time they had reached her she was already gone,
cut to deep and for way too long.
If someone would of done something a year ago,
She could of been the person that we never got to know.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's about me...I just hope I dont end the same way. Please comment.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Spiffay (3-24-2005 - 11:55 AM)
I love it and can relate

by Xsucker4loveX (3-24-2005 - 03:36 PM)
this is gr8... i totally rel8 2 it... kinda makes me sadd

by xXxInsaneInsidexXx (3-24-2005 - 04:40 PM)
Yeh I like this, can really rel8

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