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» Poem: Not Right
Not Right
written by hiddensoul
05:46 AM 3/25/05
Nothings right.
Not anymore.
Sometimes I feel like your gone and I cant get you back.
You slipped away from me.
It wont be the same.
You slipped away.
Never came back.
Nothing is the same.
Not anymore.
Nothings alright.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It doesn't ryme.It might suck. Hell, its my first time really letting people hear me.So tell if you like and I'll write again....soon.

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by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 06:54 AM)
i like this poem..... very nice

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