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» Poem: You can chase it away *plz comment*
You can chase it away *plz comment*
written by mishy0077
02:28 AM 3/26/05
The scars are more visible then ever before
The pain you caused me, seems much more
But still I love you more then ever
Even though you could treat me better
You break my heart almost everyday
but then you build me up another way
You're always there
you seem to care
You're a bit sleezy around your mates
But sweet when we are alone on dates
Why can't you just act yourself everyday
Because I would like it better that way
I don't know why I love you when you act like this
I don't know why I always want you to kiss
I want your hands allover me
make me see things i can't see
I want you to take me away from this all
I need you to catch me when I fall
take me to your bed, please
No, I don't want to just tease
I need you inside my soul
Please fill up this horrible hole
this hole in my heart that holds me down
The pain inside is always pushing me around
If you take me now, you can fight it away
then we can be together everyday


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I have no freaken idea wtf this is about. lol. I just wrote it. lol. PLEASE COMMENT

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» Comments / Feedback
by Dragon_skin (3-26-2005 - 02:31 AM)
this is a ....... nice poem

by not_alive_nor_dead (3-26-2005 - 02:33 AM)
this is good.. it definatly yas a meaning lolz... good poem

by (guest) (3-26-2005 - 02:57 AM)
interesting...

by xfadingmemoriesx (3-30-2005 - 08:48 AM)
lmao you're sucha good writer. i wish i could write as well as you do. x] i love all yer poems.

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