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» Poem: mirror
mirror
written by JUGGABLOOD
06:38 AM 3/29/05
i look inside my mirror
embaressed an ashamed
think i lost my sanity
whats inside this brain ?

how much longer can i stand this ?
im locked away an lost
im not competeing for your attention
i shouldnt but i must

i fucking hate my family
i fucking hate this place
i cant fucking be here
i want to cut an slash this face

i will take one last look at myself
im finally at peace
now you know im not here
an thats because of the deep cuts now im deseased....

im all better now
im alright
please dont be like me
please work it out,this time.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok,i know im not good at writing but its how i feel an its kinda how im venting.soo uhh yea....

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» Comments / Feedback
by bloody_tears_girl (3-29-2005 - 06:40 AM)
i can relate to this so much. very cool

by craziness (4-1-2005 - 04:04 AM)
Amazing...simply amazing....a 10/10.

by just-cant-be-me (4-17-2005 - 01:41 AM)
i liked it and i can relate

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