» Poem: Pain(plz comment) |
Pain(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me03:50 PM 3/29/05The pain inside builds up everyday,
and every breath is painful,
I look in the mirror
and see a person who tried to change themselves
How can I explain how I feel,....
The struggling I suffered.....
every morning I wake up I can hear the voices of pain...
The days are to short,
and the nights are too long,
and every day my heart grows weaker,...
as days pass by
The wind gets colder,
as my days turn older,
the memories from the past haunts my night.....
This pain I can never forget,
it makes me who I am today... |
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» Comments / Feedback | by lostdreamz08 (3-29-2005 - 03:52 PM)
by Metal_freak (3-29-2005 - 04:50 PM)
I think your a pretty good writer and I'm sorry for your pain. We have some in common You should U2U me and maybe we can talk some> |
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