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Dawn Creek
written by GeishaGirl
06:25 AM 3/30/05
A gentle zephyr brushes through,
The quiet town christened Dawn Creek
Tonight disturbance will befall
Disturbance that will not be forgotten
The town of Dawn Creek will scar

Drifting down the near naked street
The night has already fallen
Her bare pale feet glow luminously
Eyes glitter madly in the dim light
Sleet falls gently on her bloodstained body

Eyes watch her as she calmly drifts
Children scream “monster!” and point
However her expression remain bland
Blood glitters as the droplets fall to the ground
Finally the frail body collapses

Dawn Creek will never forget
The rape of someone so beautiful
Her laughter will always echo
No-one will ever forget-
The rape of Father Harold’s daughter


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its a bit... um... yeah...

Questions comments criticism welcomed.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (3-30-2005 - 07:24 AM)
Its a bit amazing. *two thumbs up*

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