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What they've reduced me to (plz comment)
written by The grey raven04:52 PM 3/31/05All alone in this ice cold corner
Haering those words replay in my head
I'm nothing, a failure, a worthless bitch
Somethimes I think I'd be better off dead
Feeling their words slice through my skin
And and crawling into my thoughts
I only wish that I could fight back
With all the strength I haven't got
I'm screaming inside
Tasting my own blood in the air
looking for comfort
But theres no one else there
I think to myself about ending it all
There's no point left in going on
By the time they realize what they have done
I will be long gone |
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About a past experience, I'm sure many people here will understand
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Metal_freak (3-31-2005 - 05:08 PM)
| it was good I know what you mean.
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by (guest) (3-31-2005 - 07:32 PM)
| hia,
im pretty sure u only have one comment so far and i think thats not rite as your poem is really really good. its actualy more tha nthat but idont know how to put it. thanx for putting what i feel so often into such great words. thats the thing about poetry...its the best words put into the best order...its very cool
xxx |
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