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» Poem: your pain is mine
your pain is mine
written by bloodlyvalentine
09:43 AM 4/3/05
i catch the falling stars
bleeding from your eyes.
they sting my hands,
they burn me deep inside.
your pain is mine,
when you bleed i die
like a withereing rose
loosing its life.


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i cant think of anymore.

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» Comments / Feedback
by rammstein-freak (4-3-2005 - 10:08 AM)
wow, what can I say? thats quite a moving poem :)

by depressedlittleone (4-3-2005 - 10:17 AM)
wow that is a dang good poem.

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