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» Poem: Life,Love,and Pain
Life,Love,and Pain
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
07:11 PM 4/3/05
A young baby with a whole life ahead,
laying there crying in the hospital bed.
Cutting off the ambilical cord setting her free,
not sure of what she'll become or what she'll be.
When you're young like that you have less worries,
the problems in life seem to get all blurry.
You grow up having people always there,
people always loving, people always care.
You get older and find things change,
you get used to it but at first it's strange.

When you walk this journey soemtimes you'll find,
that one special person you can truely call "mine."
The person who does everything right to you,
the one who seems too good to be true.
With radiant beauty and a heart full of gold,
gives you shivers and turns your body cold.
The love of your life and when you think nothing can go wrong,
you realize this happiness only lasts for so long.

You get stabbed in the heart,
and feel your insides rip apart.
Tears stream down,
emotions thrown around.
Mixed feeling linger about,
you feel the need to scream and shout.
The great person you thought you knew,
turns out to be disasturious to you.
You find it hard to want to live,
when you gave everything you could give.
The thing that matter most is gone,
you cant stand this suffering for too long.

Next thing you know you're back there agian,
laying in the hospital waiting for the end.
Wondering why,
you're still alive.
As you lay there in you're hospital bed.
wishing you could just simply be dead.
You realize in life there's nothing to gain,
it's just a repeating cirlce of Life, Love, and Pain


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Please coment sorry it sux

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» Comments / Feedback
by Scythe42 (4-3-2005 - 07:46 PM)
that didn't suck. That was really really really awsome. The rythym was really good.

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