» Poem: It's Just A Fucking Dream |
It's Just A Fucking Dream
written by bloody_tears_girl05:12 AM 4/4/05help me through my pain,
dance with me in the rain,
watch me as i fall asleep,
in your arms so tenderly.
love me like iv'e never been loved,
cut with me so we can mix our blood,
fly with me so our wings can touch,
i love you, i love you so much.
kiss me on my lips so deep,
feel the pain right out of me,
sleep with me under the stars,
we've been through so much shit, now here we are.
touch my heart, but keep it in place,
unlike whats-his-face,
now i'll wake up and realize it's a dream,
and desparetly try to go back to sleep. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by OpenUrEyesAlone (4-4-2005 - 05:21 AM)
i really like your first stanza, but the second one kinda scares me alittle, over all i really like it! |
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