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» Poem: Slipknot inspired song
Slipknot inspired song
written by Firequeen
07:39 AM 4/5/05
Your all Ive ever wanted
all I could never get
Not after demons pointed
at what I would regret

All devestating sadness
ill live in the MADNESS
Crushed bones still walk the earth
before death was rebirth...

It's not that hard to be living dead
heart is stoned still body is fed
Take my half and breake it apart
but soon ill return from the dark
but soon ill return from the dark...

All devestating sadness
ill live in the MADNESS
Crushed bones still walk the earth
before death was rebirth...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is very unfinished, but i wanted to post it now in hope of some comments with ideas, or criticks

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» Comments / Feedback
by butcakes (4-5-2005 - 07:42 AM)
yeah, could do with some more work, but still a great start!!! i can see ow it was inspired by slipknot... slipknot ROCK... go see them in concert if you havent... then maybe youll experience near death! ROCKON!!!

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