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Cascading...
written by cryptic_misery05:49 AM 8/3/04My eyes are windows
Look into my soul
See the pain you've caused me,
but do not touch the hole.
My heart was once there,
You took it away
Now a hole grows
Each and every day
My breath is the wind
It gradually fades
Soft, lonely journey
my life cascades
My soul is a tortured bird
Suffers than it falls
Sitting in the shadow
Right as the end calls... |
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I wrote this not too long ago, and it's one of my favs so please comment it [ View cryptic_misery's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 381 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (8-3-2004 - 09:50 AM)
It's one of my fave's too! You're such a great writer... your poems continue to surprise me with your growing talent... have you thought about publishing a book or something? you should consider it |
by dumb_blonde (8-3-2004 - 01:21 PM)
UR POEM IS TOTALLY AWESOME, AND DEEP. I'VE READ ALMOST EVERY POEM U POSTED AND SO FAR THIS IS MY FAVORITE |
by (anonymous) (8-5-2004 - 05:16 AM)
Yeah, I also agree... this is a great poem... I love it... not as much as I love you though. (Tony) |
by I_heart_jack_black (2-1-2005 - 09:04 PM)
ooh! pretty! your write better than I do! ^.^ |
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