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I Changed My View
written by SuperBob05:56 AM 8/3/04Some time ago I was a different person,
With different opinions, and points of view.
Never wanting to find someone to emerse in,
All of that changed when I fell for you.
Showing me how to open my heart,
Had me running and hiding in fright.
But you chased after me, just for a start,
and now I wish to be with you this night.
Though it seems monatonus, I agree,
But with someone else I would still cut
I love you more than my ankh times three,
for without you I would still be stuck in a rut. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okie...so i really lost it in the end there...that damned last stanza....well more or less just line 2 and 4 of it...but whatever...i cant think...meds kicking in
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| » Comments / Feedback | by weird_chick420 (8-3-2004 - 06:00 AM)
| how the hell do u write so good?
-kym
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