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» Poem: COLD
COLD
written by Choking_Away_Life
09:26 PM 4/5/05
My heart can't handle another let down
and my wrists won't survive another cut
cold steel dragging across my skin
ripping at my flesh
I feel your hands around my neck
strangling my heart again
it seems to me
you enjoy hurting me
more then i love to hurt myself
my addiction has gone too far this time
I know
because I'm cold
the blood pours out of my body
from gashes so deep
my sanity soars
and I kiss you one last time
and with that one last kiss goodbye
I take a breath
and slowly die


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i need help with a title...

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» Comments / Feedback
by butcakes (4-5-2005 - 10:21 PM)
i would help you out with a title, but im getting too sick fo hearing of people cutting themselves and dying etc... i know, its probably your deepest feelings and youll hate me for saying it, but i hope you undersand its all i hear on this site... great poem! but like i said, the theme is re-occuring.

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