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Who To Take Blame?
written by Khaotic
09:44 PM 4/6/05
do you ever see what you are doing so unwise
who to take the blame for your unwise actions
someone is dying, something lost, someone else
lying in a ditch begging for some money
dont you wish you could be stronger then that
please give me something back, something lost
lost in this reality, beggin for money, what have i become
im sick of being this, i feel dead inside, your dead within
it makes me sick inside, lately everything is so unreal too me
so where is my angry today, i feel like nothing, its always this way
feeling like what i have become feeling ripped away from reality
seeing myself this way, when will this ever end, will it be the same
cant i ever be something, can i ever win, cant win this way
do you ever see what you are doing so unwise
who to take the blame for your unwise actions
someone is dying, something lost, someone else
lying in a ditch begging for some money
dont you wish you could be stronger then that
please give me something back, something lost
lost in this reality, beggin for money, what have i become
im sick of being this, i feel dead inside, your dead within
it makes me sick inside, lately everything is so unreal too me
so where is my angry today, i feel like nothing, its always this way
feeling like what i have become feeling ripped away from reality
seeing myself this way, when will this ever end, will it be the same
cant i ever be something, can i ever win, cant win this way


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name say's it all!

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