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» Poem: what u did was wrong!
what u did was wrong!
written by alwaysyours4life
01:33 AM 4/8/05
what u did was wrong
i tried to help
i tried to be there
for u
as i grabed
for u
u were gone
you fell until
i couldn't see u
i loved u for who
u were
and i found out
the oppioste
u liked
me b/c
u wanted me
b/c u thought
i would give u something
but after i didn't
u left me
u left me all alone
w/ nothing to show 4
our love
then u came back
u said u wanted
me back
i came back
i showed u more
and felt more
4 u
and u took
advantage of it
i was 9
u were 12
i was dumb
but u knew
that i loved u
and u took advantage
the wall and i
collided like
a hammer and i nail i screamed
u laughed i said stop
u said
it was my
lucky day my only comfort
was that it would be over
in a matter
of minutes
but it wasn't
my clothes
were ripped
my heart
was torn
it was
finally over
i ran
i ran never
to see u again
3 yrs later
u called
u said
u wanted me back
i said no
what u
did
was
wrong!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is 4 u ppl who r scared and alone, but ur not alone anymore

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» Comments / Feedback
by *.:emo_lover:.* (4-8-2005 - 01:37 AM)
That is such an awsome poem. I truely honistly liked it.

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