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» Poem: dad cant you see?(plz comment)
dad cant you see?(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
02:11 PM 4/9/05
Why did you treat me bad??
Why did you make my mum so sad??
The things you said were so mean
No wonder why you work at Quality Dry Clean
What did i do wrong??
I even wrote a song
About how you used to treat me
Can't you see??
To me you died 3rd January 1993
I Don't care what you do
And i don't care what you say
I never loved you anyway
I'd choose my step dad Fred over you any day
I didn't have to call for your birthday
I should have done what you did
Think of any excuse to say
lie in every single way
Everything you put mum and i through
No mater what you say
Will never leave our hearts until our dieing day
These bad memories will never die
No matter how much i cry
I have these bad feelings inside
And I'll never be able to push them aside
This isn't fair
But you've never cared


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by DarkBloodySoul (4-9-2005 - 02:13 PM)
Wow.. Thats a really good poem.. It left me teary eye'd

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