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» Poem: dad....why?(plz comment)
dad....why?(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
10:50 AM 4/10/05
Why did you choose to not be a father,
is there something i have done wrong,
its as if you don't even bother,
what happened to Mr. faithful & strong,

how much longer will i miss you,
why must you not talk to me,
after all i have been through,
haven't i already paid the fee,

am i just a picture in your scrap-book,
or maybe a picture on your wall,
would it hurt to take a look,
am i anything at all.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 10:57 AM)
OMG i feel so sorry for you!!!! you must be going through hell!!!!!,dont worry your not the only 1,my dads a bit of an ass,but not as bad as yours!(no affence!) gd poem though

by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 11:40 AM)
your not the only one,if u need someone to talk 2 were all here

by devilwitwings788 (4-10-2005 - 12:30 PM)
That is a great poem, not to mention it reminds me of my life...

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