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Slit her.. Slap her..
written by perfect.flaws10:19 PM 4/13/05I once was whole, now just a piece of a coal.
I once was half, i once could laugh.
I once was quarter, i've grown colder.
You passed my border, ive gone to bitter.
[Pitter Patter, Slit her, Slap her]
I once was a butterfly that could flitter,
but now im an icecube, that just goes chitter.[chatter]
I once was the sun, always had fun,
but you took out that mental gun.
Now im pluto, cold as the snow.
[Pitter, patter, Slit her, slap her]
I once had flow, and always glowed,
until you made her go.
The rain goes pitter patter, on the window sill.
Down my spine i get a chill.
You slit her, And slapped, until there's no more life.
You make me want to grab a knife.
When she still had a soul,
that was when i was whole,
When she was able laugh,
that was when i was still half.
When she still stayed bolder[then me]
that was when i was quarter.
But now she's gone,
And now im nothing. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This girl was my other half. I ment everything to her, and she ment everything to me.
But her parents beat her, and slit her with knives, she still alive, but not emotionally.
But i'll still be there for you! i always will
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-13-2005 - 10:28 PM)
| that was the best poem i read all day. nice job...
it didn't suck that bad... |
by Ruined_Hopes (4-13-2005 - 10:36 PM)
| good poem, and if that is true well then....FUCK!!un-FUCKING-beliveable
and i would never do that or be able to that to my own child, let alone anyone else's. but anyway, FUCK!!those mean bastards!!! |
by X Water Combo (4-13-2005 - 10:43 PM)
| Wow! great poem but I feel horrible for that girl her parents should die. I enjoyed reading your poem and I hope your friend is ok. I hope any gods that may exist llok out for you and her. |
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