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MY TURN (comment plz)
written by demented_vampire
10:22 PM 4/16/05
You pushed me away from you,
you broke my heart.
I cant believe I missed you,
when we were apart.

I loved you and cared for you,
and I was always there.
I never said anything,
but now I know that wasnt fair.

You looked at me,
but not for love.
I just filled a space for you,
so you can cover up.

I was only there,
because you needed a chick.
I should have realized earlier,
that I was your only pick.

I loved you,
because I thought you loved me to.
My friends always told me to let you go,
but I still chose you.

Now Im over you,
its not going to effect me.
You cant have me anymore,
Im not going to be your 'baby'.

I hope from this you learn a lesson,
and I will just go.
I will ruin every relationship,
so you wont make them your hoe.

You thought you could run me,
but now you know.
There is one thing you need to know,
before I go.

I dont know why I stayed with you,
I should just put you what you put me through.
Just get over it know,
I pick my friends over you!


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-16-2005 - 10:49 PM)
omg! i love that its really kewll its just what i think of about my xb/f! wow!

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