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» Poem: Suicidal Misfit(PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS)
Suicidal Misfit(PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS)
written by emo_death_chick
11:10 PM 4/18/05
Read between the blackened lines.What comes out is not a lie.Blood will drip and you will die.I'll be god and watch you cry.Soak your blood up close your eyes,make a wish than say goodbye.Watch you as you fade away, slowly,deathly,on your way.As I stagger side to side I will wish that you wont lie.Up in Heaven they said no.Down in Hell they said dont go.As you drift between the lines I can see it in your eyes.You want help but I said No.Youve caused pain and now you know.People cared about you girl.People cried when you said bye.You want to live and stay alive.But now your dead and now your mine.Your on your knees,Youve even whined.Youve realized that pains a lie.Cover your cuts and you wont die.Dont try agian or else your mine.I let you go to find yourself.You are lucky you have someone else.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this poem.it reminds me of something i did and im not proud of doing.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 05:45 AM)
wow that was pretty good. made me think a lot

by poetic_tragity_x (4-21-2005 - 01:13 PM)
That really sucked...it made me yawn.....(cough..poser..cough)

by midnight_mistress07 (4-23-2005 - 01:42 AM)
The last person was just jealous because your poem kix ass :)

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