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Emaciating
written by cryptic_misery08:15 AM 8/8/04Slash my throat until I can't breathe!
Take my life! Let me leave!
Beat me down into the concrete
Choke my soul until you defeat!
Don't let me stay
Just take my soul away!
Make me so sore
Reach in my core
Pull everything out
Yet don't ever doubt
Sock me till I'm numb
Slam my head til I'm dumb!
Just please get rid of this
I'm sick of the pain, I want to go to bliss!
I hate being here
I want to die it's clear
I don't want to stay
I'm slipping away..... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ah yes another sad poem. Again i guess it's good, what do you think? I don't really feel like this right now, except for in the back of my mind like I said. Don't be worried I'm ok for the most part...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-8-2004 - 08:17 AM)
| Except this. And be ready for this.. beause I'm doing it. Why? Because I can.. I liked it.. Suicidal, but all in all brutal. So I give it a thumbs up. |
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