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» Poem: Alone In Darkness (NEEDS COMMENTS)
Alone In Darkness (NEEDS COMMENTS)
written by Tonagamu55
02:26 PM 4/19/05
Alone in darkness,
Lost in the shadows,
Misunderstood by everyone,
Hidden by all.

(Chorus:)
No one sees me,
No one knows me,
N one cares anymore,
My story remains untold,
Nothing will unfold,
In this life of emptiness.

Heard by deaf ears,
Seen by blind eyes,
Everything is just a blur,
In this dark cave of mine.

(Chorus)


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 02:29 PM)
You have alot of talent. I loved it.

by aimee (4-19-2005 - 02:31 PM)
needs to rhyme more but its kwl

by coolsal_rulz (4-19-2005 - 02:57 PM)
yeah ok its a cool one really!

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