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Pick Her Up (NEEDS COMMENTS)
written by Tonagamu5502:43 PM 4/19/05Give me the greatest lover,
And I will treat her like no other,
I'll show her every way I can,
How I can be her true man,
She'll come to me looking so down,
With a smile that was turned into a frown.
(Chorus:)
And I will pick her up,
Take her inside my door,
I will treat her like nobody's,
Treated her before,
I'll make her look beautiful,
In every way,
On the inside and the outside,
Every single day.
I'll make her never foget me,
She'll love me for all eternity,
Even years after we have parted,
So long she will be broken-hearted,
I will always be by her side,
Until the very day that I die.
(Chorus)
I will always look after her,
Just like I did before,
Event after it's all over and through,
The skys will still be blue.
I will always die for her,
I will always cry for her.
(Chorus)
Give me the greatest lover,
And I will treat her like no other,
I'll show her in every way I can,
How I can be her true man. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by angel1dot0 (4-22-2005 - 07:19 AM)
| Those are very sweet lyrics.
The "cry for her, die for her"-part was maybe a bit on the kitchy side though.
But still, it's nice change to all the "watch me die and splutter blood all over the grave yard"-crap that usually is put on these boards. |
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