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it's not love it's pain (comments plz)
written by crimsonregret08:40 PM 4/20/05there's nothing left to say
you know everything now
are you happy that you
finally know the truth
or does it hurt to know
i hurt ?
i thought my love for you
would grow but's slowly
dieing with every hatefull
word you say to me.
everyday i lied to you just
so you wouldn't say those
words you dipped in poison
ready willing and able to
hurt me. |
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ok just read and give a coment if your care
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Overtaken{by}Depression (4-20-2005 - 08:58 PM)
| I love it!
but i gotta say...
This is comment, see comment rurn, run comment run. lol
Keep up the good work buddy!
~Courtney |
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