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Tip Of The Knife (NEEDS COMMENTS)
written by Tonagamu55
01:27 AM 4/23/05
You were the one,
You were my sun,
You were my light,
But now things aren't rightn.

You turned your back,
You made my have a heart attack,
When you said you were in love,
And I was your angel from above.

(Chorus)
But now it's all at the tip of the knife,
You used to be the love of my life,
But now it's all changed,
And my life is now a constant rain.

It was real,
The way you feel,
When I sang you that love song,
Now it feels so wrong.

You turned your back,
You made my have a heart attack,
When you said you were in love,
And I was your angel from above.

(Chorus)

This love was all a lie,
I wish I could just roll over and die,
But I'll continue living without you,
And I'll forget everything I knew.


You ripped me apart,
You broke my heart,
You want me gone,
And I want you gone.

(Chorus)


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» Comments / Feedback
by just-cant-be-me (4-23-2005 - 01:49 AM)
hey this is nice i loved it u should check out some of my stuff somet time, keep uo the good work

by LaLa125678 (4-23-2005 - 01:50 AM)
I'm sorry for whatever happened.

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