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» Poem: Until You Say You Love Me
Until You Say You Love Me
written by Emo_Death_Wish
10:45 PM 5/9/04
I'm challenged by your threats
Of taking over
A demise I haven't met
So how am I over

Chorus---Until you say you love me
I'll be a ghost
Until you say you love me
I'll be all lost

This chaos playing in my head
Is never ending
I think I'm better off dead
In my flight descending

Chorus
Until you say you love me
I'll be afraid
Until you say you love me
I'll dance with a blade

You don't choose me
But it's okay
No I'm lying, I hope she dies
And I hope she burns

Chorus


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by just _me (5-10-2004 - 02:21 AM)
prety harsh twards the end but nice job

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