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Remain Unknown
written by cryptic_misery07:58 PM 8/22/04I've got so much more to lose
Then I'll ever have to find
But when I'm in your arms
I let loose and I unwind
Holding you close
I'll never let go
And every bad thing
Will remain unknown |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Short. Sucky. Gets the point across. When I say I've got so much more to lose then find is because I've found my tony, one of the greatest things i have. Nothing much left to find really, and If I lose him that will be much more then anything I'll ever find. <3
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (8-22-2004 - 08:10 PM)
by dumb_blonde (8-23-2004 - 07:53 AM)
| not trying to be mean but when you say "let loose and unwind" it sounds like you need to fart
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by Trapezium (8-28-2004 - 08:40 AM)
| nice poem and lmao at dumb_blonde |
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