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3 times(i cant breathe)
written by i_love_sandy
02:55 PM 9/5/04
one day i was in a fight
where was the light...nowhere in sight
she was yelling and punched me, it hurt
i wanted to cut... wanted blood to squirt
she was yelling more and hurt me bad
i couldnt breathe, i was so sad
i was to faint but i heard a voice
to hear it all was not my choice
he told me to breathe and hugged me so
so i guess this blood didnt really show
another day i was talking to a friend
about how my heart was gone and dead
i couldnt breathe, it happened to me
i wasnt breathing, i couldnt see
he tried to help, it didnt work
i thought of death wich made it worse
finally i could breathe
finally i could see
i went to rest, woke the next day
talked to my friend, cole to wash the blood away
i asked him how he was he wasnt ok
his demon was there, and hurt me i say
he made me cry and hurt me so bad
his demon is an ass, his demons a cad
it happened once more
my heart was torn
his demon was gone
cole knew he was gone
he tried to help, i almost passed away
i found my breath and i was ok
but my heart hurt and i knew i couldnt stay


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
somethings trying to kill me i know it.......this really happened.....its probably gonna happen again.....oh yeah and just so u ppl know the world is gonna end 2018...no joke....live your lifes now or dont live at all.

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