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written by Firequeen07:24 AM 6/9/05Poem Style: noneTime to crack a hole in the wall.
To look out in the sun, then fall..
Never needed to be known, never hungered for fame.
If I fail in my cause I have plenty to blame,
but I won't, cause there is no shame.
Don't even know what I'm writing now,
what I'm trying to scream, perfectionistick cow!!
Thougth my head must be dead,
It bleeds, it bled...
Random thougts comming up and soon dissapear,
from where they arrive I am not aware.
Chougth in counfusion,
I must find a solution.
I don't understand,
for what purpose this wast land.
Was built and made,
then rapidly fade.
In self made illutions we bade,
that is the fate of man.
We sing our own damination,
spit upon life's creation.
Past full of life and glory,
left is nothing but a story.
All I do is watch and write,
looking for my saviour knigth.
is he there and do he even care?
I hope he is aware, and for me will fight.
I think I see things that others don't
or maybe I cherish what others wont.
Dosn't matter I'm nothing better.
Like everyone else I hope for salvation,
some kind of appreceation.
It's a hunger lurking inside.
Maybe I'm only fate's next bride.
A mere lady with eyes open wide, and no power do decide. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
someone lock me up and throw away the key... x.x
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| » Comments / Feedback | by intearsforever (6-9-2005 - 07:34 AM)
| Wow, this is AMAZING, like one of the best poems I've read here. There are some spelling errors, but the concept of it is GREAT. You are really good, keep it up! xxx |
by chelseal3 (6-9-2005 - 08:33 AM)
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