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Hey Dad
written by DontFearAConcequence01:01 AM 9/27/04hey dad hey dad
will you look at me now?
hey dad hey dad
did i make you proud?
i hope i did
cause i cant anymore
my cold, still body
sprawled out on the floor
i hope youre proud
proud of my death
proud of my courage
my willingness to confess
hey dad hey dad
will you look at me now?
hey dad hey dad
did i make you proud |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by secret_screaming (2-27-2005 - 12:16 PM)
| A tiny bit like one of my poems - well the title is the same anyways.
But it much better than mine its really good |
by secret_screaming (2-27-2005 - 12:16 PM)
| A tiny bit like one of my poems - well the title is the same anyways.
But it much better than mine its really good |
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