» Poem: so far out |
so far out
written by bloodlyvalentine09:02 PM 11/7/04so many people
around me
talking,
laughing,
crying
why dont i feel you there?
the laughter we should share
but im drifting away
from everyone else
on my own block of ice
was always drifting,
slowly becoming
as far away from you
as i could bare
and now im so...
so far out
that i cant feel you here |
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» Comments / Feedback | by mistress (11-8-2004 - 12:00 AM)
completely true for me........great poem |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-8-2004 - 04:49 PM)
thanks mistress, its a scary feeling |
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