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dirty
written by bloodlyvalentine06:31 PM 11/15/04dirty floors
dirty walls
everything is DIRTY
get it away
just leave me alone
your minds are all so
DIRTY! |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-15-2004 - 07:11 PM)
It was nice, also it was really short. It could of been nicer, if it was longer
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by bloodlyvalentine (11-15-2004 - 07:37 PM)
nah i think its fine short, i like short |
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