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he said..... she said....
written by bloodlyvalentine04:29 PM 11/20/04she said....
he said....
but i cant hear
can you please
run that by me again?
hes saying...
shes saying...
but im not listening
lost in my own world
of fucked up dreams
he said....
something to hurt me
she said....
something to pain me
but this time....
my ears were open
my mind was here
could you please
rewind that back?
so i can loose myself
in another fucked up dream
to never hear anything
ever again... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Emotional (11-20-2004 - 05:03 PM)
| hi, i was reading your poem/story and it was really good. hope your doing ok and not so bad as i am sometimes |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-22-2004 - 11:59 AM)
| hey, depends how bad u do sometimes, hehe |
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