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dark fantasy
written by bloodlyvalentine09:34 PM 11/29/04do you never feel the cold
the pain
that bites you deep inside
a shiver through my soul
a scar left behind
from the your icy words
that left these unseen scars
do you never feel anthing
for anyone?
i see your black walls
standing ten feet high
nothing ever goes in
nothing ever comes out
why cant you share your pain?
break a smile for me
everything reflects off you
only ten times worse again |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
uh random thoughts....... there was gonna gonna be more but i couldnt think of any......
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dacode05 (11-29-2004 - 09:56 PM)
| 9 times worse...i think...anyway, your random thoughts seem to be the best. Always enjoy! |
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