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Role In Society
written by Morbid Angel05:46 PM 12/12/04| To millions of different people spread across the world, I'm nothing but a dot in their minds, an insignificant little girl. I play no part in these strangers lives, there must be thousands out there like me, the same thoughts, the same mind. To all these people I don't mean a thing, God won't see me because he doesn't exist. I play no part in this puppet show and I have no idea who pulls the strings, so I have no choice but to walk alone and control my own two feet. How does it feel to be alive? It feels great so why do we cry. Strangers don't see me but one person does, his love spread across the world so it all adds up to enough. You see, God, I won this time, theres so many people with such empty minds. I wouldn't want them to see me in the street and think anything of me, I wouldn't notice it anyway because they don't need to see. I'm playing my own game and I'm pulling my own strings, every battle you fight against me I'll always win. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sarah10087 (12-12-2004 - 05:49 PM)
| would you call that poetry?? If oit is, i hate this kind of poetry, wheres the structure?? there is none!!!! |
by arnie (12-12-2004 - 05:55 PM)
| Go away. This suCKS donkey dick! |
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 06:19 PM)
| I don't write to please you, I write to let my own thoughts out. If you don't like the way it looks, then oh well. Do you really think I'm going to cry about it and delete all my poetry? I seriously doubt it. There is no rule that says poetry has to be in verses, because it's the meaning behind the poem that counts, not the way it looks. It's so much easier to write like this because it doesn't matter how it looks or anything like that. So shut up kthnx. If you don't like my poetry, don't read it. Thank you and good day. |
by Trapezium (12-12-2004 - 07:02 PM)
| This type of poetry is called Freeverse or freeflow. Simply because it has no structure. It's not mean to have a structure. Dipshit. |
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 07:07 PM)
| Thank you. It's alot easier to write this way,and if you took the time to read my poetry you'd realise that most have structure. |
by devilchild01 (12-12-2004 - 07:31 PM)
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