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antidote
written by DontFearAConcequence
11:56 PM 12/29/04
I thought I’d never “fall in love”
But then I met you, an angel from above
I was sad, I felt unloved
I’d like someone, but then I’d get shoved
Every relationship would end in a mess
And people ask why I’m depressed?
I feel like a have an incurable disease
I feel like a dog, all these tormenters, like fleas
But then I met you for the very first time
By first glance, I wanted you as mine
Those 45 minutes seemed like forever
Did I want it to end? NEVER
When I saw you, I was cured from my fears
I’ve been do shy for so many years
But since that night I’ve been looking forward
I want to see tomorrow, free as a bird
I thought depression and tears were here to stay
But I day dream about you, on my bed as I lay
If this is just a joke, make it be over
What would make you do that? Were you not sober?
I think I should stop thinking that way
I know if you heard my true feelings, you’d have nothing to say
I want to look you in the eye
And tell you that I’ll love you until I die
I need more of my antidote
When I want to say my feelings, I choke
I don’t know what it is about your style
Or maybe it is your heart-melting smile
Maybe it’s the way you flirt with me
Or maybe the random compliments, but you see…
I want to see you again I just can’t wait
I want to go see you; we’ll call it a date
Even though my mom doesn’t approve of you
I don’t care; she can’t control what I do
So if I haven’t scared you away…
If I asked to see you again, what would you say?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this poem quite a while ago..im not too happy with how it sounds, but its early work and i dont like to change things like this

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