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Gone but invisable
written by TowelytheThing
10:51 PM 4/22/04
I love you so much.
When I killed myself.
Just and only for you.

Finally I stopped breathing.
But never did I die.
Yet not alive at all.

The blood stained our bodies.
My heart still intact.
I couldn't move anymore.

This soul roamed your house.
It lay invisable in your bed.
I couldn't be dead...

I am not dead,
Not alive either.
Just invisable in your eyes.

As well as everyone else's,
My mind could still see.
My body could still feel.

I watched you cry.
Over me...
Just then I shed a tear.

It was as alive as you.
When you saw that wet spot,
You knew I was there.

Saying, it's great to meet again,
Thank you for your love,
You're still here for me.

My soul understood.
Then knew it was time.
I was gone.


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eh it's dedicated to my friend...

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