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» Poem: Outstanding
Outstanding
written by Morbid Angel
01:35 PM 1/30/05
Your talent is outstounding, you should feel my heart pounding...as I read your work, word by word. It paints a picture in my head, when all imagination is dead, when the world around me is empty I turn to words instead. It might not have the beat but theres a rhythm to your rhymes, expressing the real pain behind your eyes. I understand your darkness, the shadows dancing in a place so heartless. Full of people who don't give a shit, but I've got these words to get me through it. And thats really all I need, what use is it to bleed? I don't gain a thing. It just shows that I'm not strong enough not to break, maybe it's a cry for attention or a sign of heartache. But your words can explain away the day, the thin line between love and hate. And I realise I'm not alone.


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» Comments / Feedback
by deathsythe (1-30-2005 - 10:17 PM)
ditto to you, you have awsome rythm and flow in your rhymes, and you have a poem for pretty much every emotion, so, yeah I just read your poems when I depressed, they give me a sense of closure.

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