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To Make Her Go Through Hell
written by Morbid Angel10:19 PM 2/27/05Carrying her heart in her arms,
She holds on for her life.
None of it makes sense to her,
This is nothing but an existence.
To make her go through hell.
It takes too long to learn to be,
Perfection reached in eternity,
But then it's too late and no one sees her face,
It took her too long to make it back.
All for nothing she went through hell.
Lifes not worth bleeding,
And not worth living.
But when she realised it was already too late.
She went through hell to see your face. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by skulls (2-27-2005 - 10:31 PM)
wow thats was brill
iam jelous u make better poems then i do |
by floggingfelix (2-28-2005 - 03:34 AM)
wow, that's really good. u2u me sometime |
by teejavus (2-28-2005 - 10:43 AM)
by wiltedrose (2-28-2005 - 09:38 PM)
I think that was really great. I know that you have probably heard this type of comment over a millian times, but I hope it means all the same. |
by XlostxandxforgottenX (3-1-2005 - 09:15 PM)
hey, that was a really great poem. you could feel the emotion in it. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-3-2005 - 10:46 AM)
After all the poems you've written, you can still write astonishing works of awesome art. |
by (guest) (3-3-2005 - 09:46 PM)
by maggalo_666 (3-4-2005 - 04:24 PM)
that was awesome good job |
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