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Dream Come True Shattered
written by darkness_follows_me05:44 PM 3/4/05I'm smothered by a memory tonight,
entangled in your finger's phantom touch,
the filgreed chills of your delicious bite,
trapped in the comfort of your drunken clutch--
for what your ardent kiss meant yesterday
seems so clear it stings like shards of glass
that slash my eyes to hear your echoes say
"what is now, what was then, this must pass."
If lost, these words are simpler than they seem;
simply listen to the echo when they pass:
they say I want to haunt your every dream--
it says "dream on, you're an ass." |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Forever Cursed (3-4-2005 - 05:47 PM)
| I like your poem....up untill the last line. If you changed the end line to something a bit more mature it would fit better with the rest of the poem. Apart from that well done! |
by blackie-hawk (3-4-2005 - 05:48 PM)
| Hmm, I'll think that's a little to weird for me. :S hmm. |
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