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» Poem: untouchable reality.
untouchable reality.
written by bloodlyvalentine
10:44 AM 3/20/05
screams of deceit.
my world is fucked up.
nothing is sweet...
not that bloody river
that runs from your neck.

do you hear what i hear?
see what i see?
you will never know what its like
to be as far out as me.
the beauty shines in
but will always be,

untouchable....

... like reality.
the pleas in my head
whining whining...
its all out of reach.

screams from my own throat.
this is real.
screaming untill i cant breathe anymore.
my vision blurs with bloody tears.
screaming as death drags me under
with its clawing hands.
but still no body hears me.
nobody comes.
nobody cares.


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by tearsofblood (3-20-2005 - 10:52 AM)
ahhhhh its so sad :...( it was really excellent though... love always *>tears of blood

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