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Break Me
written by bloody_tears_girl02:40 AM 3/28/05listen... do you hear the silent screams,
smothered by your hands?
do you feel my heart pounding,
waiting to be ripped out?
dont let me smile, dont let me be happy, dont let me live,
break me, just break me.
open your eyes... do you see me looking at you,
waiting for you to look back?
take control, im waiting,
waiting for you to grab me... hurt me...
break me, just break me.
take your lifeless arms,
wrap them around and strangle me.
unknown creature of the dead, take me.
see my bloody hands, awaiting you?
wrap me in your cold dead blanket,
and break me, break my life in two.
ignore my tears, dripping to the floor.
ignore my screams, piercing the air around.
just laugh it off, laugh me off,
push me down and break me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by girlofthelost_vamplover (3-28-2005 - 10:16 PM)
by _acceptable_loss_ (3-29-2005 - 07:59 PM)
| I love it . . very good writing |
by for_future_use42 (3-29-2005 - 09:25 PM)
| Awsome, just Awsome. I'm sitting here in school and (actual quote) i said "man, this is an awsome poem," got some funny looks, but hey... awsome. |
by MoodPhilosophy (3-30-2005 - 05:55 PM)
| An okay poem. After reading your rape poem i thought you were incapable of writing well, but i must admit this is a good step up.
-Uli |
by trulybroken57 (3-30-2005 - 07:47 PM)
| that is so beautifull...........i really like it, it flowz well, it is so easy to relate to........wow......... |
by tortured_angel_1 (3-31-2005 - 03:26 AM)
| wow; i think it's really good. i really like all your other poems too.
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