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» Poem: Lonely Little Girl
Lonely Little Girl
written by bloody_tears_girl
05:53 AM 3/29/05
in the corner she sits,
alone and crying
mascara running down her pretty face
her black fingernails digging into her arms
looking up to see nothing but darkness
people thought she was beautiful
SHE thought her knife was beautiful
people used her,
she used her knife
people wanted to be her
no, not her, they wanted to be her lie
no one knew how she really was
she covered up her life by fake smiles and lilttle luaghs.
she needed someone to hold
someone to love
she is just like the room she is sitting in...
cold, dark, empty, and lonely.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sucky poem, but oh well.

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» Comments / Feedback
by secretsxandxlies (3-29-2005 - 06:28 AM)
I like it. It kinda reflects me but not. Anyways keep up the good work.

by Bite2BreakSkin (3-29-2005 - 06:29 AM)
omg this poem is so sad, and i love it. its really deep. ur an awsum fucking writter- keep writing- i absalutly LOVE your poems. much love

by xBroken_Soulx (3-30-2005 - 02:18 AM)
awesome

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