» Poem: It had to be done (I miss you) |
It had to be done (I miss you)
written by The Black Halo08:39 PM 3/31/05Walking slowly in the rain.
With clothes drenched, and dripping wet hair.
Blood on my hands
And a sack over my shoulder.
I miss you,
But it had to be done.
I'd drag your body
Along the floor,
But it would rip a hole in the bag.
And I'm sure no one but me
Wants to see your decomposing flesh.
We're nearly there my love,
And I will miss you.
That's why it had to be done.
I wanted to keep you mine forever.
But you showed signs of loving others.
I guess I couldn't cope,
I couldn't handle it.
The light of the fire
Glows along the horizon,
And embers are floating through the air.
Instead of saying goodbye tonight,
I'm saying 'I'm yours'.
Forever.
I miss you,
But I wont miss you any more.
The day you died left a hole in my heart,
So I'm staying by your side.
Goodbye, world,
Hello, my love. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by eminem_lover (3-31-2005 - 08:42 PM)
R U SERIOUS..haha just kidding,i should have killed couple guys myself.good on ya...lol |
by maledeth (3-31-2005 - 08:45 PM)
Well, damn those past love bastards to Hell! They always leave picayune holes, and most of the time, they burn! Good poem! |
by 2120deathangel (3-31-2005 - 08:53 PM)
it's sad, damn good but sad. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-31-2005 - 10:15 PM)
by unpure_substance (4-1-2005 - 04:19 AM)
Brilliant work!!!!Hopefully none of those previous emo fucks comment on this. |
by Antisocial (4-11-2005 - 03:16 AM)
That was an awesome poem. Yeah it was tragic but it still kicked ass. |
by DemonSlayer (4-11-2005 - 03:29 PM)
I honestly love your poems. I hate myself for admitting it but its true. |
by Evilmonkeysdance (4-19-2005 - 03:08 AM)
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