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The taste of blood
written by casablanca_babe02:19 PM 4/6/05I poked a blade in my wrist and licked it as i fell down,
i drank the red fluid as I swallowed; I was a king without a crown
I licked some more and realised how good it tasted,
mmm i said full of haste
that night was full of passion better than sex,
I carried on doing this until i passed my best.
one night i began to taste fell down and fainted
my vision was grey and blurred fuzzy and dainted
i gasped; i died ; i am writing from hell
pass me some water down in this fiery pit where i dwell |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by casablanca_babe (4-6-2005 - 02:20 PM)
| if u av spare moments leave a comment lolo |
by Jonismyeternallove (4-6-2005 - 04:22 PM)
| good and weird at the same time |
by (guest) (4-6-2005 - 04:48 PM)
| I find the last part funny but great poem over all |
by bamsLOSER666 (4-8-2005 - 02:13 AM)
| no onse but this is a lil weird i like it tho lol |
by slipknotchick (4-11-2005 - 04:54 AM)
| wow! this shit is fucking crazie! |
by darkness_follows_me (4-11-2005 - 07:30 PM)
| that was well gd,keep up thw gd writing! |
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